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Old November 11th, 2008, 12:27 PM
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I think the out of focused portion at the top is distracting, unfortunately I tried to capture it again but the sun went in.



1/400 @ f 5.6
-0.67 exposure bias
focal length 300
ISO 200

Please let me know what you think.
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Old November 11th, 2008, 02:51 PM
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I completely agree with you regarding the out of focus areas .... there is much too much that is out of focus and a very narrow band that is in focus. I like the concept that you were going for, but just don't think you hit the mark with it. I think it would be worthy of a reshoot, using methods that will increase your depth of field rather than limit it. Use a tripod so that you can use smaller apertures and longer shutter speeds.
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Old November 11th, 2008, 06:00 PM
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I completely agree with you regarding the out of focus areas .... there is much too much that is out of focus and a very narrow band that is in focus. I like the concept that you were going for, but just don't think you hit the mark with it. I think it would be worthy of a reshoot, using methods that will increase your depth of field rather than limit it. Use a tripod so that you can use smaller apertures and longer shutter speeds.
The tripod is one thing I did not bring today (duh). I will be bringing it with me from now on. I will definitely try a reshoot. Thanks for the critique Carl!
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