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Old October 18th, 2015, 07:53 PM
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Playing around with my Macro lens.
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Old November 17th, 2015, 11:01 AM
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Re: Colors

I really like the idea but I have to agree with Michelle.
Even just one tip would change the effect.
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Old November 17th, 2015, 06:35 PM
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I agree with the critique above but it's still a great shot and definitely "Color"ful Maybe you have one from the shoot where there are some of the tips in focus
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Old November 17th, 2015, 06:39 PM
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Re: Colors

Your focus as mentioned you should be on the tip of the crayons unless of course you want to change your angle of view looking at the sides of the crayons.

I think also you would benefit from a much longer DOF to have the entire top of the crayon in focus rather than the tip alone.

This can be accomplished effectively by using focus stacking.
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Old December 7th, 2015, 08:44 PM
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Thanks everyone. Great points!
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