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Old November 22nd, 2005, 12:28 AM
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Hello Everyone,
I'm new here and was hoping I could get some feedback on a picture I took recently. I had to take it for an assignment in school, and it consisted of 'showing' how I spend my time--which is obviously with my foster sister, Dawn.

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Old November 22nd, 2005, 07:42 AM
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Welcome Ladybug! Lovely little girl and I like the autumn leaves as a background, the composition is good, the pattern on the shoes adds to the image as well. It does seem to be a little out of focus though. Not a bad start and Dawn is a little cutie with a cheeky grin!
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Old November 22nd, 2005, 11:05 AM
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This is a really cute picture, and I also like how the pattern on the shoes adds to the image. Like Terri said it does seem a little out of focus. Also, I would try getting down more on her level...it looks like you are looking down with the camera. The composition is good and you did choose a very nice background (simple and effective). This is a good start and keep them coming...
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Old November 22nd, 2005, 11:28 AM
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Thanks for the advice. I'll keep it all in mind!
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Old November 22nd, 2005, 12:36 PM
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Nice shot and definitely a cheeky grin ... seems to be saying "ok now you owe me a McDonalds".

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Old November 22nd, 2005, 07:26 PM
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Hehehe, she loves getting her picture taken. Everyday she asks me if I'm going to take more pictures of her today. =P
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Old November 22nd, 2005, 09:10 PM
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Yes, the focus does seem soft to me, but it still is a very good shot!
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