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Old September 20th, 2011, 10:03 AM
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Four Sticks

On from last Sunday.


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Old September 20th, 2011, 12:13 PM
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Re: Four Sticks

Very nice, just wish it was a little larger.
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Old September 20th, 2011, 12:38 PM
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Re: Four Sticks

I really like this image. Proper night time exposures have always eluded me. This looks like it was taken right at the end of the sunset colors fading out of the sky? I really like the four sticks in the lower right, which also make for an interesting title.

The only things I notice that I don't like is the grass in the lower left really distracts me from the silhoutted trees in the background. Unfortunately, aloning water seems near impossible. Also, I feel like the whole image is just a tad underexposed for my taste. Overall a great capture!
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Old September 20th, 2011, 08:52 PM
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Re: Four Sticks

Thanks Brian for the detailed critique. I bumped the levels a touch since posting this one I will give cloning the grass some thought.
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Old September 21st, 2011, 05:27 PM
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Re: Four Sticks

I really like this a lot, but am curious- is the moon added into the scene? It seems to me that it's in the wrong place and position (meaning, the light showing on the moon should be to the right and not left, since the setting sun is also facing on the right side of the moon). Just wondering. Even if it is added in, it's a nice touch to a wonderful image.

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Old September 21st, 2011, 07:16 PM
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Great capture. Nice job on the exposure and I really like the composition.
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