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Old January 6th, 2016, 01:15 PM
Acantilado Acantilado is offline
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and see everything...

It could be said that I am only starting with photography.
I am in love with this picture because of the eyes of the guy. He is a friend of mine, which means that I know I am bias about the beauty of the photograph. So, I would love to hear any comments about the mistakes or errors of any type you can see, in a way that I could improve it for the next time.
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Old January 6th, 2016, 01:21 PM
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Re: and see everything...

Great first post! I like this one a lot.

It's sharp in all the right places and it looks really good converted to B&W.

1 thing I would do is I would pull it back some. Not have the top of his head and chin cut off. Most head shots are just below the neck line.
2nd thing if you want to use a photo in competition you should remove the blemishes in the photo.
3rd thing is crop the sides tighter and maybe clone out the bright spot next to his ear (photographers left subjects right)

That's it.

Hope this helps you.

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Old January 6th, 2016, 01:23 PM
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Re: and see everything...

Thank you very much Sharna, I really appreciate it!
I will follow your instructions!
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Old January 6th, 2016, 03:44 PM
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Re: and see everything...

It looks a tad soft around the eyes. The eye should almost always be tack sharp. Perhaps a smaller f-stop to in crease the depth range would help along with Sharna's advice. I do like the intense look though abd BW is a great choice of treatment.
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