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Old October 13th, 2005, 07:52 AM
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Seems underexposed to me and a little too much empty space on the right. Good job at stopping the action though!
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Old October 13th, 2005, 08:44 AM
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My first reaction : Wow, a very good action stopping shutter,
my secodn reaction : Hmm, there is too much dark areas all around and too much of empty space on the right.

I could say more if it was in feedback corner, and I dont want to offend you by sggesting ways to improve when all you wanted to hear from us was our critical comment on this picture.
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Old October 13th, 2005, 11:51 AM
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The slope of the ground to the right would be more of a leading line instead of empty space if the camera would have been tilted slightly... but a very good capture nonetheless!
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Old October 13th, 2005, 01:40 PM
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Pictures which do not have leading lines to the main subject, need to be tightly cropped so that there is nothing else but the main subject in the frame. So in this case I think, cropping off some area from the right and the bottom will help.

Secondly, the shadows are too dark, a photoshop shadow/highlight tool will reveal some details from the shadow and overall the entirte picture is underexposed a bit, so after revealing details in shadow by the shadow/highlight tool, increasing exposure by about 1/3 will also be good.
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Old October 13th, 2005, 06:52 PM
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i understand! ok and i see about the leading lines to the main subject, another thing i never nkew... thanks for giving me tips to improve my photography
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