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Old June 19th, 2004, 03:32 PM
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Flower

I am submitting a picture for critique after a long time, almost a month.

I was a little busy and never went out for photography.

I would be glad if people pointed out what they did not like in this picture.

Your comments and critiques will help me to improve.


for exif visit
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I have uploaded few more pictures of flowers at
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Old June 19th, 2004, 03:43 PM
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Great shot... good colors... excellent focus as well... the stem in the top right corner is a little distracting... a tighter dof would have helped a bit, I think. Excellent border choice... it compliments the photograph really well.
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Old June 19th, 2004, 05:22 PM
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Ditto for the leaf in the right corner. For me the frame gives it too much color, and its a bit overwhelming, but thats just me.
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Old June 19th, 2004, 06:06 PM
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Is it me or is the centre of the image actually a fraction out of focus?

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Old June 19th, 2004, 08:27 PM
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Just to let you know guys that I am listening to all you r comments and making serious mental note of it.

Keep'em coming...
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Old June 19th, 2004, 08:48 PM
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I think I disagree about the focus, though it is personal preference where the focus should lay with flower shots... some like the pedals perfectly in focus, while others prefer the center...
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Old June 20th, 2004, 06:23 PM
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Which part would you say is in focus in this example?

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Old June 20th, 2004, 06:29 PM
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The pedals, and the top of the center... my personal preference is exactly how Punit did it.
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Old June 20th, 2004, 10:00 PM
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Yes, Tim is right. The petals and the top part of the center are in focus and that is what i intended.

Absolutely right in saying that it is personal preference how one does it.
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Old June 21st, 2004, 10:10 AM
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Interesting... I'd never looked at in this way. I'd have always assumed that I should be trying to get the centre in focus. Thanks for the insight - I learn more every day.

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