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Old May 29th, 2009, 02:01 PM
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ThE GlOrY !!

hi, it's my first photo i'm going to share with u in this great forums


i took it last year ... by my ex ex-camera sony DSC-T7


I call it [ The Glory ]



f-number f/5.6

1/250 sec

iso-64


i'd like to hear ur advises to get better !
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Old May 30th, 2009, 12:36 PM
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Re: ThE GlOrY !!

Hi,

Interesting concept.

I would straighten the horizon and use some post processing to lighten up your central flower.

Jon
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Old May 31st, 2009, 10:30 AM
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Re: ThE GlOrY !!

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Hi,

Interesting concept.

I would straighten the horizon and use some post processing to lighten up your central flower.

Jon

thanx for the feedback bro ..
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Old May 31st, 2009, 11:26 AM
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Re: ThE GlOrY !!

I agree with Jon. Your central subject is too dark. I don't mind the angle so much but, the underexposure kills the image.
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Old May 31st, 2009, 01:37 PM
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Re: ThE GlOrY !!

It's been said - I too would bring the horizon up and adjust the exposure to brighten the main subject. . .

Andy
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